Great work on the entry and the sobriety. I remember you from playing before. You were a good writer with a penchant for bleakness, but the bleakness wasn't what made the writing good. You have a compelling, no-nonsense style that I've always enjoyed, and you make good use of it here.

Don't get me wrong; there's still bleakness here. But there is also hope, which was hard to find in some of your previous work for Idol. The blending of these two makes for some very interesting reading and I'm doubly interested to see how much more will begin to bleed through as you continue your journey.