Date: 2024-09-12 01:12 pm (UTC)
erulissedances: US and Ukrainian Flags (Default)
Loved the story and how you worked the prompt, but the various grammatical and/or typographical errors really pulled me away from the tale. Maybe do one more proofread before posting next time, because I love the world you've been creating here.

- Erulisse (one L)
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